IELTS 作文

Assignment seven

 

对比飞机和小汽车旅行(限制飞机旅行)

 

Front: Nowdays,the advanced technology vehicle such as mini-car ,luxury ship and

 

          beyond-sound travelling aeroplane are making our life more convenient and

 

         more efficency.In order to relax body and enjoy comfortable life,most of people

 

         are happy to go suburb or abroad for holidays.Governments are restricting the

 

         small car travel approach because of the enormous number of car,and the air pollution

 

         caused by them,But on the contrary,I personal think the ultilize of planes should be

 

         decreased.

 

Segment Two

 

argument: The cost which used to not noly assemble the aeroplane but also to build the

 

                 airport and appliance are tremendous.

 

evidence: It is reported that the each ordinary airplane of civil aviaton enterprise may

 

                cost approximately one billion,There are about twenty aviaton corporations

 

                and six hundred plans in my country,Our goverment and those companies

 

                spent much money on maintenance planes and update device,the cost will

 

                put on heavy burden to our goverment in finance.

 

Segment three

 

argument: Travelling by air are become more and more dangerous,with more and more

 

                advance science and technology be used in the flying machine manufactrue process.

 

evidence: Apporximately,Nobody can being rescued from the air crash.The losing which did by

 

                an air crash not just only in finance,such as destroied many houses,fired forest,But also

 

                the accident will hurt each misfortune's family members and friends,let their heart broken,

 

                The depression and frustration emotion will also do long lasting negative effects on their

 

                every aspects of daily lifes.

 

Segment four

 

argument:Actually,The environment pollution did by planes is more serious than which did by small cars.

 

evidence:Bigger and more powerful engines in each aeroplane,greater number of electronic

 

               garbage from an unprofitable plane ,and heavier poisonous smoke emit out from them.

 

               All of those fuctions are aggravating our surrunondings pollution,Opposition,smaller and

 

               less powerful engines,less petrol cost,and cleaner smoke give out will do harm to our

 

               life condition and health slighter too.

 

Finality:

 

              On the one hand,the plane brings many benefits to our life,For instance,save our

 

               time more efficenct,and let us get to our destination more convenient,But on the other

 

               hand,It also did many bad effects on our lifes,On the contrary,the small car with

 

               many excellence must be recommended,and it will become the most favoriate

 

               vehicle in the forthcoming futrue.