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2005年6月六级真题（第1套）
Dirtections:
For this part,you are allowed 80 minutes to write an eassay commenting on Alert Einstein’s remark “I have no special talents.I am only passionately curious.”You can give an example or two to illustrate your point of view.You should write at least 15 words but no more than 200 words.

answer:
[1.1 Talent or Passionates改为名词:Passion
[学习提示] 易混词汇: ability, capacity, capability, genius, talent, competence, faculty, gift, aptitude 均可表示人的“能力，才能”之意。
自己修改：
2.2 Do you have some special talent?
[拓展辨析] 动名搭配 have…talent 在语料库中出现过 732 次
自己总结：
运用动名词搭配
3.3 Do you have large passion?
[词语错误] 请检查passionates，确认拼写正确。
[近义词表达学习] large的同义表达有miraculous或marvelous。
自己修改:
passionates应该改为名词
large可用同义词替代:miraculous、marvelous
4.4 If your answer is YES, I will appreciate to your answer.
[标点警示] 英文标点符号之后通常须加空格。
[学习提示] 易混词汇: appreciate, enjoy 均含“欣赏”之意。
[推荐表达] If : provided that
5.5 Rather than your answer is No,please lesten to me follow.
[词语错误] 请检查lesten，确认拼写正确。
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查。
[标点警示] 英文标点符号之后通常须加空格。
[学习提示] 易混词汇: fairly, pretty, quite, rather 都有“相当，颇”之意。
6.6 “Special talents is offed on me,Passionate to curious is owned on me.
[标点警示] 英文标点符号之后通常须加空格。
[学习提示] 易混词汇: queer, odd, funny, crazy, curious, peculiar, strange, eccentric, quaint, singular 均含有“奇怪的，奇异的，新奇的”之意。
6.7 “Alert Einsten said.
[标点警示] 该句句首与上一句句尾标点符号之间空格缺失。
7.8 May be the famous Scientists want to tell us that the talent may be isn’n the only important element to us.
评语： 错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；衔接成分偏少；作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇，在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练

范文：
1.1 The Importance of Practice “Knowledge is a treasure,but practice is the key to it” is a proverb vividly showing the relationship between konwledge and practice.
[词语错误] 请检查importentance，确认拼写正确。
[词语错误] 请检查konwledge，确认拼写正确。
[标点警示] 英文标点符号之后通常须加空格。
[拓展辨析] 动名搭配 show…relationship 在语料库中出现过 24 次
1.2 Apparently, this saying delivers the message that if we want to truly acquire the knowledge, we ought not to stop /quit (doing) practicing what we’ve learned.
[标点警示] 该句句首与上一句句尾标点符号之间空格缺失。
[推荐表达] stop practicing : cease停止 to do/ quit doing
[推荐表达] if : provided that
provided that如果；条件是；倘若
[拓展辨析] 动名搭配 acquire…knowledge 在语料库中出现过 37 次
2.3 As for US college students/pupils, practice is of great importance.
[代词错误] us 疑似代词错误
[标点警示] 英文标点符号之后通常须加空格。
[学习提示] 易混词汇: pupil, student, learner, scholar 均含“学生”之意。
[闪光短语] 高分词组，be of接名词用来说明句子的主语所具有的性质或特征。
2.4 There are two reasons for this statement.
[标点警示] 该句句首与上一句句尾标点符号之间空格缺失。
[学习提示] reason表示“原因，理由”。注意与cause的区别。详情点击
2.5 To begin with, it is by practice that we can apply the knowledge we have obtained more from our textbooks to solving practical problems/. 困境；进退两难；两刀论法
.
[词语错误] 请检查bagin，确认拼写正确。
[词语错误] 请检查obtaibed，确认拼写正确。
[标点警示] 该句句首与上一句句尾标点符号之间空格缺失。
[拓展辨析] 查看practible与practicable的区别。
[推荐表达] problems : issue/question/case/trouble/difficulty/dilemma
2.6 By doing so/hence/consequently, we can get more experience.
[标点警示] 该句句首与上一句句尾标点符号之间空格缺失。
[拓展辨析] 动名搭配 get…experience 在语料库中出现过 89 次
[推荐表达] so : therefore/thus/consequently/accordingly/as a result/for that reason/hence/that’s why
2.7 What’s more,knowledge has become so growingly complicated that if we don’t ponder over 思考it again and again,we cannot genuinely grasp the essence of it.
[标点警示] 该句句首与上一句句尾标点符号之间空格缺失。
[闪光短语] what’s more有助于提高文章衔接
[学习提示] 易混词汇: knowledge, learning, scholarship 均有“知识，学问”之意。
[推荐表达] if : provided that
[推荐表达] so : therefore/thus/consequently/accordingly/as a result/for that reason/hence/that’s why
*2.8 Oral Engilsh learning is a good ease in point.*
[词语错误] 请检查learniong，确认拼写正确。
[冠词错误] 冠词多余，请检查a good ease。
[标点警示] 该句句首与上一句句尾标点符号之间空格缺失。
[推荐表达] ease : alleviate/relieve/lighten
[学习提示] 易混词汇: oral, verbal 都有“口头表达的”之意。
2.9 Even if one is extremely familiar with the grammar of the language,he will never be a fluent speaker if he doesn’t open his mouth to speak.
[句子错误] 请检查open，确认主谓一致。
[词语错误] 请检查doesn，确认拼写正确。
[标点警示] 该句句首与上一句句尾标点符号之间空格缺失。
[拓展辨析] 动名搭配 open…mouth 在语料库中出现过 311 次
2015年6月大学英语六级考试真题(一)
【写作】
The Importance of Practice

  “Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it” is a proverb vividly showing the relationship between knowledge and practice. Apparently, this saying delivers the message that if we want to truly acquire the knowledge, we ought not to stop practicing what we’ve learned.As for us college students, practice is of great importance. There are two reasons for this statement. To begin with, it is by practice that we can apply the knowledge we have obtained from our textbooks to solving practical problems. By doing so, we can get more experience. What’s more, knowledge has become so growingly complicated that if we don’t ponder over it again and again, we cannot genuinely grasp the essence of it. Oral English learning is a good case in point. Even if one is extremely familiar with the grammar of the language, he will never be a fluent speaker if he doesn’t open his mouth to speak.   To sum up, practice is of great importance for those who are determined to truly grasp knowledge. Practice not only assists us in getting more social experience, but also enables us to capture the essence of knowledge.

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