ICB paper improved by Alison

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1. It 指代上句话的主语

Most optimisation strategies are based on the gradient decent algorithm, which is easy to trap into the local minima.It (按道理指代strategy) will reduce the fitting accuracy.

Josef: ...................................................................................................................................................................................................., thus reducing the ............................

Alison: .....................................................................................................................,which facilitates trapping into local minima and fitting accuracy reduction.

2. adv 尽可能离 v 近

FSF improved the performance of face reconstruction and face recognition greatly(读者要花脑筋想greatly修饰谁，可读性差).

.........greatly improved ..........................................................................................................

3. Introduction 段落中要保持时态一致。尤其主句从句，是太要一致。

was... did.... can be (could be)

4. 同一连词或副词不要一直用，换个相同意思的词，保持DIVERSITY

So the performance is not so (very/as) good.

S1. Then,.... Then....

S1. Then.... Later

5. 名词前要加冠词the/a/an 这是目前我犯错最多的点。

6. 其他细节

（1）. 3D face reconstruction is performed by(通常指人，改为using) 3DMM.

（2）. ... is an ambiguity (ambiguous 科技论文要用最常见的方式)

（3）collocation (固定搭配)

assist in seperating

an effective algorithm for improving

To our best knowledge (错)-》 To the best of our knowledge

(4) 3DMM can estimate the 3D shape, the texture, the 3D pose and the light direction.

....................................the..................., texture, 3D pose and light direction. (注意缩减)

(5) et al 只用于如下一种情况

Smith, Joues+Mou=Smith et all

etc=an the rest

(6) 是。。。而不是

It only models shape and texture, not models 3D features.

It models only shape and texture rather than 3D features.

(7) Besides the features used by... (Besides is used to describe somethingnegative)

In addition the features used by....