IETLS エッセイ 、トピック：グローバルの正面と負けの影響

トピック：グローバルは肯定的方法で世界の経済に影響を与えるます、その負けの側面を忘れではならない。

even though globalization affects world's economy in a positive way,its negative side should not be forgotten .

since the second world war was over, the whole world is gradually becoming peaceful . all the countries develop their economy positive . with the development of high tech . like the Internet these decades  has made the world smaller. the globalization has become a main trend.around the advantages and disadvantages of it,different people have their arguments .let us take a look at the following arguments:

 the people who are the upholders of it believe that globalization definitely make a active impact on country 's economy. first of all, it is indisputable that the foreign trade among countries are flourishing more and more ,it accelerates the imports of high tech products from developed countries to developing countries. it improves the economy of developing countries. on the other hand, the developed countries gain much more resource to advance forward. second, the globalization enhances the relationship of people around the world,especially these years ,the coming up of the Internet has made people to communicate each other in the convenient ways, it is very great for the culture development.

however, there is old saying goes like :every coin has two sides, the globalization also brings some negative influences to the world , we can not ignore its existence. it is obvious the international crimes growing up dramatically ,these case are drawing attentions of people ,because it  is usually hard to  investigate .

from what i mentioned above ,let us conclude it that the advantages outweigh disadvantages.