IELTS writing task A （2）

number expresssion :
1 million and 1.5 millions in 1990 and 2000, respectively.
A bought 200 fiction books, 100 non-fction book and 50 magazines.
account for the largest proportion (54%) of the eletricity used
(represent) 8% of the population in 1990 and 20% in 2000
this figure amounted to 9%
From 5 grams in 1970 to 30 grams in 2000
Hamburgers are the most popular fast food in the high and average income groups (43 and 50 grams per person per week, respectively).

ineaset to 4.5
decline to 34.
stand at 4
hava a slight increase, peaking at 7
see a slow decrease, bottoming out at 9


Time

between 1970 and 2000
in 1970 and 2000
the thirty-year period
the period between X and Y
(over)the 16 yeears
over the next decade ..whereas ... over the same period

==Words:
describe/illustrate/give/show/outline/demonstrate/indicate

proprotion/percentage/

category/type/kind

family/home/household

number/figure/amount/data/information

trend/pattern

By contrast/In contrast/In compasion/However/on the other hand

According to the graph/As shown in the graph/As can be seen from the graph
We can see from the graph

==sentenses（the first and the last sentenses）:
We can see from the bar chart that...
The bar chart shows data about

The line graph outlines the general pattern of fast food consumption between X and Y.
The bar chart showsthe amount of moeny expended on fast foods according to three different income groups.

 

Therefore , it is clearly seen from the charts that...

句式变换 :

1.被动
Hamburger showed the greatest increase in comsuption during this time period.

Pizza, on the other hand/however, experiences a steady decline, from 300 grams to just over 200 grams duiring the 20-year period.

 

2.主动

From just under 100 grams in 1970, people ate over 5 times this amount of hamburgers by 1990.

3.时间作主语
The peirod btween A to B  experience a downward trend , from C to D.




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==table :

The total number of was 123 (12 to college students, 30 to staff, 32 to the public and 12 to memeber).

==Line graph:

--time order
At first at time,
Then,
After that,
From the point onwards,
But finally


==bar chart:


==pie chart:


==process/map


==two graphs :
==Template1 :
The bar chart describes the amount of money spent on Hamburges ,Fish and Chips and Pizaa while the line graph shows the trend of consumptiopn of them .

The bar chart shows ...
The line graph outlines ...

Therefore, it appears that ...

==Template2 (same types of graphs)
The first bar chart shows data about ... between X and Y while the second bar chart describes information about A in 1970 and 2000.

According to the first bar chart, A is more/higher/ than B over the thirty-year period.

The seconde bar char clearly shows that marrired people accounted for the greatest proportion of

Therefore, it can be clearly seen from the chars that ...